I really really like

It's improving. Serious. Your story is getting better. I like it.

What I don't like is the fact I didn't get matriculation.

=.=

Chapter 26: Friend

I was telling Min what happened yesterday.

She was really listening to me!

Seems like she is interested in it.

"OMO!" she said when i told her about the letter with a poem in it.

"OMG!!" Her eyes goes wide when I told her he kissed me on my forehead.

I touched my forehead unconsciously.

I was still in shock with his movement yesterday.

It's recess time.

Minho and the others didn't attend school today.

They must be busy.

Busy........

They are going to debut soon.

How can I...

This is silly!

He is going to be famous!

I'm just an ordinary girl.

He is going to have a lot of die-hard fans soon.

I'm just his ordinary friend.

Sigh....

This won't work out.

He is going to be very busy to...

Will we even have time to...

URGH!

What am I thinking?!!

NO.

I should tell him.

This would not workout between us.

I felt a knot in my stomach, a tight one.

"Min,"

"mmm?"

"I don't think we can be together,"

"Uh?"

"You know..." No.Min doesn't know he is going to debut!

"What are you talking Chaerin? wake up,"

"I...nothing.Sorry.It's just I think it won't work out between me and him,"

Min was quietly frowning at me.

"What are you trying to say?"

I sighed and said, "I hate it,"

"Hate what?"

"This feeling I'm having now,"

Shew giggled as usual, calm and softly encouraging.

"Chaerin, I know how you feel,"

Uh?

"What?" I asked her.

"Forget me,"

"You know how I feel,"

"I'm a girl, Chaerin and i had this once," she bit her tongue.

I was looking at her with surprise all over me!

Surprised not because she is been in love.

Surprised because she never told me about it!

"Min, you..."

"I know.I liked someone before but it's too late i guess.My best friend likes him and he likes her too," she was still calm and full of aura?

"But you should have gone for him first.You should have tell him or showed him that you loved him or something,"

She just giggled.

"I cannot do that.That's bad.I will never betray my friends," I think that's Min.She is always too good to someone she respect.

"I'm sorry..."

"Forget about it.That's long time already.I'm moving on now and I'm happy to have you," her eyes twinkled.

Chapter 25:

Your POV

I look at the paper he passed it to me.I was struggling to take it in my hand.My fingers are twitching making me to grab the paper.I 'm trying my best controlling my blush from bursting.My heart has been beating vigorously ever since he started talking to me about ME!

Class ended without realization.The bell rang.That's when I realize everyone's started packing.

Time to go home!

I quickly slip the paper into my pocket.

Maybe i can read it on my way home.

When I step out of the class, Minho was there leaning against the wall.I know he is looking at me.I can feel adrenaline all over my body!!

STOP STARING!

I walk pass him quickly, trying to ignore him.

When i was outside of the school, my mind was fresh.

I took a deep breath and took out the paper.

I never was struck that hour

With love so sudden and so sweet,

Your face it bloomed like a sweet flower

And stole my heart away completely.

You did this to me.So have to answer me.Did you steal my heart? why?

Now i am officially FROZEN!

OMG! He is asking me WHY??!!

I read the poem again and again.

It's my first poem i'm reading from a boy.

And I somehow felt something in my stomach...

something ticklish and at the same time that makes me feel happy?!

A poem.

The weather is quite warm but i felt so cold.

The paper is still in my hand.

I am sitting on a bench in a park near my house now.

What does he want me to do?

I need some fresh air, so i took a deep breath in and out...slowly trying to get rid of all the confusions.

Minho.......

His face.

The charismatic, charming prince.

The owner of those beautifully curved eyes.

How do I say it is Love?

How much do I know about him?

Could it be just a crush?

I've had crushes before.

But, this doesn't seems to be like a crush at all.

Every time when i look at him,

There is something that send me an electric impulse to my body.

Something that triggers my heartbeat to beat fast.

The wind was blowing, letting my hair blow against my face.

Minho's image is in front of view.

I could perfectly picture him now.

He is walking towards me.

Closer and closer...

STOP!

STOP DAYDREAMING!!

But I couldn't, he is still walking towards me.

I scrunch up my face and pinch myself "Ouch!"

BUT NO. I am not daydreaming!!

HE IS IN FRONT OF ME!

LIKE

FOR

REAL!

I stood up abruptly, gasping for breathe with the sudden shock of him.

"Is that mine?" He look at my eyes and ask.

I nodded slowly still looking at his eyes too.

He was just inches away.

I can feel his breath now.

I felt something warm on my

Forehead.

He kissed me.

Minho kissed me on my forehead.

I had to blink! I can't just stare at him with that shock expression.

"Mianhe," I bowed and walk away without turning back.

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Hey, you said you will blog! Thank you for your comments on my blog! =))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

This is two guys after one girl right? Yes! I guessed right! I'm so happy for you that you are doing so well at the fanfic site! See, I told you your story was good. Just avoid some mistakes kay? Its rare for a guy to say such things to a girl! I have to constantly remind myself its just a story!

Chapter 24:

Your POV

I woke up with sunlight shining straight into my eyes.I look around and realize i was still wearing my school uniform.

Did i slept in school?!

What happen?

Think!

WAIT.

I was with Onew.

And..

I came back home with him.

Did I faint.

I remember blanking out.

I must have been tired.

I saw a cup of water and drank it.I was really thirsty...

And...my stomach....!!!

AHHH...It's GROWLING..!!!

I think it's because i didn't eat dinner yesterday.

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"Noona, are you alright?" Ilhan seems to be worried.

"Ne,"

"You didn't wake up since you fainted!" Ilhan was telling be what Onew did.

It was embarrassing to hear that he helped me with my coat.

I shrugged.

"Thanks," I simply said.

"No.Don't thank me.Tell Jinki hyung,"

I nodded.

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I reached school and Min was waiting for me.

OH! Practice!

I totally forgot!!

I ran towards her.

"Come on, we are gonna be late!"

We were running AGAIN!

When we reached the practice room, i ran out of morning energy.

Everyone was here.Even the 5 of them are here.

My eyes met Minho's who was sitting on a couch with his script.He caught my gaze.I blink unconsciously while staring at him.I bit my lower lips.

The others were talking to the president.Min joined them too.

Minho stood up and started walking towards me.

His charming looks, he looks gentle but charismatic.

Flowy hair and I will never forget those eyes.

When he is just inches away, he looked at me again.

This time, there was something going through his mind.

He was looking at my eyes . I stop breathing.

"Yes?" I have to ask something to to distract the situation and this was all i could come up with.

He chuckled and tilted his head.

"Would you like to practice our scene?"

"Uh?"

I didn't get what he meant mostly because i couldn't concentrate on what was happening around me when he is so close to me.

"The lines for our scene together,"

Oh!

"Ne.Sure," I nodded. I looked down and up again.

I took out my script from my back.

I was going through my lines....

when i came across the scene with Minho.

Adrenaline rush all over me...!!!

It's a kissing scene, where after Belle admit she loves the Beast and will marry him, the spell broke.

OH NO!!

I look up at him.

Well the president sure did a good job picking him as a prince!

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Minho's POV

It's Chaerin's eyes.Those eyes that was in my mind all the day yesterday...almond shaped, long lashes, sharp nose.It's hers!

Her beauty is elegant.

Her confident is her strength.

She walk around with confident in herself.

Is this what makes me fall for her?Did she steal it from me??

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We are in our class and Chaerin is sitting next to me as usual.

"You know what?"

I raised my eyebrow.

She giggled faintly.

"Are you always like this always? you know quiet, calm, charismatic? you are very mysterious," she said.

I felt something in my stomach and i gave a glare.

She giggled quietly not to attract attention.

"See, I told you so, you are doing it now," she said again when i was quietly looking at her.

I turned away from her.

Now I know why i have fallen for her.

But i have to say something.I took a deep breath.I don't care who I am going to be soon.I can't change my feelings.

"Chaerin, you know what?"

"mmm?"

"You are gentle, confident when you walk or talk, you have really beautiful eyes, long lashes which makes you look as the most prettiest girl for me,"

I didn't stop.

Her eys were widen.When i turned to look at her, she turn her face away facing the front.She was still listening at the same time blushing too.

'Remember the first time we met, well more to our eyes met.Second time on our pre-debut show,I looked into your eyes and now in school too,"

I took out the paper the was folded neatly and passed it to her table.

She look down and saw the paper but didn't look at me or touched the paper.

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I can't comment under your post. I tried but got rejected a couple of times.

Look out for errors in writing girl! Don't forget your "s". It's a good thing to add some suspense and excitement in your stories! When I was reading the chapter where she was followed by a stranger, I thought the stranger was Minho. And then in the next chapter he was in the room. =.= I guess the story is two guys after one girl like 'Boys over flowers' right? So, your heroine's room smells of rose? She uses air freshener because my room smells of smelly socks and sunshine. Kidding. It doesn't have any smell.

Chapter 23:

Rose fragrance.


her room looks neat and tidy.Everything is perfectly arranged.Her bed in the corner of the room,wardrobe next to it, table lamp on the other side.Her books are arranged neatly on the book rack.



"Hyung, here," He brought a cup of water.



I laid Chaerin on her bed.She looks stiff and uncomfortable.Maybe it's because of her school uniform that she is wearing.



Maybe i should take out her coat.It's so hot in here and it will make her sweat if she wear like this the while sleeping.I reached my hand to the button, but my mind stop working.I feel weird and i can feel my cheeks hot.Awkward.



"Ilhan, is there anyone else her?"



Ilhan shook his head.


"No. daddy is not here yet,"



i sighed.



I quickly unbutton her her coat without blinking.Done.I put the coat aside. Ilhan had already placed the water beside her on the table.If she wakes up, she should drink some water.

I stood up straightening myself.


"I should be going now,"


"Hyung, thanks again,"


I nodded and started walking out of her room.Before i leave i whispered to myself take care.


"Ilhan, take care of your sister," He agreed and smiled.


"I will,"


I open the house door and went out.Ilhan came out to greet farewell.


"Hyung,"


"mmm?"


"Do you like my sister?"


Uh?!!


'What," I can feel my heat radiating in every cheek cell!!


"I..I..." could it be....


NO.NO.


I must not fall......


This shouldn't be happening....


In any case...


Is it LOVE?!


Do I like her?


But how sure am I?


"I ..no, Ilhan.She is just my friend," I said it casually but i was feeling something weird.


I bowed to him and started walking.


Minho's POV


I was in my room when i heard the door bell ring.Someone in the living room answered it.It must be Jinki hung.Where is he from?


I came out of my room.Jinki hyung walk pass me to his room.


"Hyung, where were you just now?" I asked


"Sorry, i was late.It's nothing,"


He never hide anything.And I'm sure the is something.He didn't even answered my question.


I frowned at him and nodded.


"DINNER IS READY!!" Key shouted from the kitchen.






After dinner, I went back to my room.Taemin is busy doing his homework and Jonghyun is training.Onew and Key are in their room.I was going through a story book where i came across something that stopped me.


A poem.


An interesting one.It's a poem from a boy to a girl in this story.

I never was struck that hour

With love so sudden and so sweet,

Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower

And stole my heart away completely.

I read it again and image of an eyes came to my mind.Those beautiful almond eyes.Whose could it be? I closed my eyes and rested my back.

Those long lashes,sharp nose, round almond shaped eyes, tan skin. I couldn't figure out who it was but deep inside i know who it was.It just doesn't want to pop out....

The feeling of happiness sprouts. But i couldn't think.I wrote the verse in a paper and went back to sleep.