Chapter 27:Tickets

Minho's POV

How could I've been so stupid!

At least I should have ask her out when I gave her the letter.

In another one more day we are going to debut.A lots of training had been going on to perfect out our debut.Our song will be released first tonight and tomorrow we are going to make our first public appearance in M!Countdown.

"Hyung, come on. Are you ready?"

I nodded quietly.

I was lying in my bed. I'm a bit nervous mainly because of critics and comment of others.At the same time, it's our first day in public view, so, I don't want to make any mistakes.

When I came out of my room, Jonghyun's voice can be heard in the living room.He is practicing his lines.

Onew is talking to someone on the phone.

Key and Taemin are playing scissors, paper and stone.

"It's the last day of rehearsal guys.Make sure no mistake is made," Manager hyung was here.

"Sure manager hyung," Onew had put his phone down.

"ok, let's go now," He said motioning us out of the dorm.

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We are practicing our Romantic now.

Yeah, my girl

I'm an idiot
Your unforgettable love,
The final tears
Are ripping away at my whole heart
It's ripping away,
(I'm Sorry) I'm so sorry

I thoughtlessly walk
Wherever my heart takes me
It seems I am looking for
Those that look similar to you
I'm still standing at the same place
It almost seems like you just tapped my sagging shoulders
And hid from my sight
Why are you not there? can I not see you?
Are my eyes looking too far?
I trusted that I could love again
Still you stay, branded in my heart unmoving.
What do I do?

It can't not be you.
I am so miserable
That I realized this now
The pictures
Make it look like I am still your love
The heat of your body and your face
I can still feel it
Deep inside my heart
Still I have romantic in my heart
I want to go back.

So many days I had
Everything of you.
But why is it (baby why)
That now (tell me why)
That I can't find you?
I'm so frightened that
In the places where our memories are deeply embedded
That I may (I know) see you there with the perfect man.
I trusted that I would meet a love like you again
The pain of you branded in my heart is death
What do I do?
[ Lyrics from: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/s/shinee/romantic_english.html ]
It can't not be you
I am so miserable
That I realized this now
The pictures
Make it look like I am still your love
The heat of your body and your face
I can still feel it
Deep inside my heart
Still I have romantic in my heart
I want to go back.

I guess I'm exhausted.
Left alone I wander,
Looking for the love left in the empty space where you were.
I'm begging you to look at me.
Look at the one so similar to you
This ordeal is too much for me

It so much worse than simply waiting
I became so similar to you that I copied even your habits
There is more of you inside me than myself
I wanna be, wanna be your man
Let's go back to the way things were
I want be reborn as a man that loves you
I won't hurt you ever again
Can I go? I wanna be... I won't let you,
Be your man

It can't not be you
I am so miserable
That I realized this now.
The pictures
Make it look like I am still your love.
The heat of your body and your face
I can still feel it
Deep inside my heart.
Still I have romantic in my heart
I want to go back.

It can't not be you
I am so miserable
That I realized this now.
(Your unforgettable love,
The final tears
Are ripping away at my chest
Leaving only scars that will never heal
Leaving me as my miserable self
I'm so distressed, what do I do?)
The heat of your body and your face
I can still feel it
Deep inside my heart.
Still I have romantic in my heart
I want to go back.
What do I do now?

Somehow this song reminds me of someone, someone I've been long forgetting.

A girl.

Her jokes, her laughs, her smile.

"Ya, Minho-ah, concentrate," Key was signalling me with his elbow.

I nod my head slowly.

Who is she?

It's not Chaerin but...

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Your POV

Phone rings

"Yoboseyo,"

"Yoboseyo, is this Chaerin?" the voice is so familiar.

"Ye,"

"Chaerin-ah, it's me Jinki," oh! Onew-shi?!

"Haha," I laughed "Onew-shi, how did you get my number?" a little shock.

"I got it from Key,"

"And how did Key get it?"

This time he laughed.

"Key got it from Min," uh?

How did Min got Key's number?

It doesn't matter now.

"Waeyo Onew-shi? "

"It's nothing.Tomorrow is our big day!"He sounded happy and excited.

"Wait, let me guess.....you guys are going to debut right?!" A little shocked that I could know what day is for them tomorrow.

"Wah! That's an amazing guess.Yes.I thought you would say, it's my birthday or something,"

"Haha, chukhahaeyo Onew-shi!"

After a several second, he responded.

"I want you to see us debut.You are one of the reason our popularity increases,"

"Me? I....,"

"You are coming,"

"But...."

"No buts,"

"Wait...but.."

"I got two tickets, you can bring _ too,"

"Uh?"

" See you later,"

"See me later?"

"Bye gotta go,"

End of phone call

WHAT?!!

Sigh.

Well, I have to support them!

It's just I'm nervous, I have to face _ too.I haven't seen _ since that day.

AH!

I'm totally not me!

I called

"Yoboseyo,"

"Chaerin!" She knows my voice well or she saw the caller ID?

"Min-ah, we are going to M!Countdown tomorrow,"

"M!Countdown?"

"Yes.I got two tickets from my friend,"

"From your friend? I thought you only had me and the other 5 from our school,"

"You'll know something soon,"

"Me? Are you hiding something from me?"

"Sort of,"

"ok..ok..,"

"be ready,"

"Of course i will! Who would miss such an opputurnity!"

I chuckled at her random cuteness.

End of phone call

I cooked dinner for myself.Daddy and Ilhan went for mens day out.

Ding dong.

"Coming,"

I opened the door and it was

Onew

"Oh! come in,"

He smiled.

"Here you go," he passed me two small rectangular size paper.

He knows my house! you silly!

"Thank you," i bowed to him.

"Anytime,"

"I cooked dinner.Would you like to eat?"

"You cook,"

I glare at him.I know he is teasing me.

He motioned me to calm down.

"I just ate,It's ok.Thanks."

"Well, congratulations.You are going to be famous soon!"

I shook his hands.

It was getting awkward.

"So,"

"So,"

"I should be going now,"

"Oh, ok,"

"See you tomorrow then,"

I nodded.

he turned to look at me one last time and I spotted something.

His face.

It shows something.He looks handsome in blue sweat jacket and black tight pants.

WHAT AM I THINKING??!! NO!

Then he walked away.

I closed the door and lean against the wall.

PHEW!

I'm so confused with my own feelings!!

I really really like

It's improving. Serious. Your story is getting better. I like it.

What I don't like is the fact I didn't get matriculation.

=.=

Chapter 26: Friend

I was telling Min what happened yesterday.

She was really listening to me!

Seems like she is interested in it.

"OMO!" she said when i told her about the letter with a poem in it.

"OMG!!" Her eyes goes wide when I told her he kissed me on my forehead.

I touched my forehead unconsciously.

I was still in shock with his movement yesterday.

It's recess time.

Minho and the others didn't attend school today.

They must be busy.

Busy........

They are going to debut soon.

How can I...

This is silly!

He is going to be famous!

I'm just an ordinary girl.

He is going to have a lot of die-hard fans soon.

I'm just his ordinary friend.

Sigh....

This won't work out.

He is going to be very busy to...

Will we even have time to...

URGH!

What am I thinking?!!

NO.

I should tell him.

This would not workout between us.

I felt a knot in my stomach, a tight one.

"Min,"

"mmm?"

"I don't think we can be together,"

"Uh?"

"You know..." No.Min doesn't know he is going to debut!

"What are you talking Chaerin? wake up,"

"I...nothing.Sorry.It's just I think it won't work out between me and him,"

Min was quietly frowning at me.

"What are you trying to say?"

I sighed and said, "I hate it,"

"Hate what?"

"This feeling I'm having now,"

Shew giggled as usual, calm and softly encouraging.

"Chaerin, I know how you feel,"

Uh?

"What?" I asked her.

"Forget me,"

"You know how I feel,"

"I'm a girl, Chaerin and i had this once," she bit her tongue.

I was looking at her with surprise all over me!

Surprised not because she is been in love.

Surprised because she never told me about it!

"Min, you..."

"I know.I liked someone before but it's too late i guess.My best friend likes him and he likes her too," she was still calm and full of aura?

"But you should have gone for him first.You should have tell him or showed him that you loved him or something,"

She just giggled.

"I cannot do that.That's bad.I will never betray my friends," I think that's Min.She is always too good to someone she respect.

"I'm sorry..."

"Forget about it.That's long time already.I'm moving on now and I'm happy to have you," her eyes twinkled.

Chapter 25:

Your POV

I look at the paper he passed it to me.I was struggling to take it in my hand.My fingers are twitching making me to grab the paper.I 'm trying my best controlling my blush from bursting.My heart has been beating vigorously ever since he started talking to me about ME!

Class ended without realization.The bell rang.That's when I realize everyone's started packing.

Time to go home!

I quickly slip the paper into my pocket.

Maybe i can read it on my way home.

When I step out of the class, Minho was there leaning against the wall.I know he is looking at me.I can feel adrenaline all over my body!!

STOP STARING!

I walk pass him quickly, trying to ignore him.

When i was outside of the school, my mind was fresh.

I took a deep breath and took out the paper.

I never was struck that hour

With love so sudden and so sweet,

Your face it bloomed like a sweet flower

And stole my heart away completely.

You did this to me.So have to answer me.Did you steal my heart? why?

Now i am officially FROZEN!

OMG! He is asking me WHY??!!

I read the poem again and again.

It's my first poem i'm reading from a boy.

And I somehow felt something in my stomach...

something ticklish and at the same time that makes me feel happy?!

A poem.

The weather is quite warm but i felt so cold.

The paper is still in my hand.

I am sitting on a bench in a park near my house now.

What does he want me to do?

I need some fresh air, so i took a deep breath in and out...slowly trying to get rid of all the confusions.

Minho.......

His face.

The charismatic, charming prince.

The owner of those beautifully curved eyes.

How do I say it is Love?

How much do I know about him?

Could it be just a crush?

I've had crushes before.

But, this doesn't seems to be like a crush at all.

Every time when i look at him,

There is something that send me an electric impulse to my body.

Something that triggers my heartbeat to beat fast.

The wind was blowing, letting my hair blow against my face.

Minho's image is in front of view.

I could perfectly picture him now.

He is walking towards me.

Closer and closer...

STOP!

STOP DAYDREAMING!!

But I couldn't, he is still walking towards me.

I scrunch up my face and pinch myself "Ouch!"

BUT NO. I am not daydreaming!!

HE IS IN FRONT OF ME!

LIKE

FOR

REAL!

I stood up abruptly, gasping for breathe with the sudden shock of him.

"Is that mine?" He look at my eyes and ask.

I nodded slowly still looking at his eyes too.

He was just inches away.

I can feel his breath now.

I felt something warm on my

Forehead.

He kissed me.

Minho kissed me on my forehead.

I had to blink! I can't just stare at him with that shock expression.

"Mianhe," I bowed and walk away without turning back.

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Chapter 24:

Your POV

I woke up with sunlight shining straight into my eyes.I look around and realize i was still wearing my school uniform.

Did i slept in school?!

What happen?

Think!

WAIT.

I was with Onew.

And..

I came back home with him.

Did I faint.

I remember blanking out.

I must have been tired.

I saw a cup of water and drank it.I was really thirsty...

And...my stomach....!!!

AHHH...It's GROWLING..!!!

I think it's because i didn't eat dinner yesterday.

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"Noona, are you alright?" Ilhan seems to be worried.

"Ne,"

"You didn't wake up since you fainted!" Ilhan was telling be what Onew did.

It was embarrassing to hear that he helped me with my coat.

I shrugged.

"Thanks," I simply said.

"No.Don't thank me.Tell Jinki hyung,"

I nodded.

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I reached school and Min was waiting for me.

OH! Practice!

I totally forgot!!

I ran towards her.

"Come on, we are gonna be late!"

We were running AGAIN!

When we reached the practice room, i ran out of morning energy.

Everyone was here.Even the 5 of them are here.

My eyes met Minho's who was sitting on a couch with his script.He caught my gaze.I blink unconsciously while staring at him.I bit my lower lips.

The others were talking to the president.Min joined them too.

Minho stood up and started walking towards me.

His charming looks, he looks gentle but charismatic.

Flowy hair and I will never forget those eyes.

When he is just inches away, he looked at me again.

This time, there was something going through his mind.

He was looking at my eyes . I stop breathing.

"Yes?" I have to ask something to to distract the situation and this was all i could come up with.

He chuckled and tilted his head.

"Would you like to practice our scene?"

"Uh?"

I didn't get what he meant mostly because i couldn't concentrate on what was happening around me when he is so close to me.

"The lines for our scene together,"

Oh!

"Ne.Sure," I nodded. I looked down and up again.

I took out my script from my back.

I was going through my lines....

when i came across the scene with Minho.

Adrenaline rush all over me...!!!

It's a kissing scene, where after Belle admit she loves the Beast and will marry him, the spell broke.

OH NO!!

I look up at him.

Well the president sure did a good job picking him as a prince!

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Minho's POV

It's Chaerin's eyes.Those eyes that was in my mind all the day yesterday...almond shaped, long lashes, sharp nose.It's hers!

Her beauty is elegant.

Her confident is her strength.

She walk around with confident in herself.

Is this what makes me fall for her?Did she steal it from me??

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We are in our class and Chaerin is sitting next to me as usual.

"You know what?"

I raised my eyebrow.

She giggled faintly.

"Are you always like this always? you know quiet, calm, charismatic? you are very mysterious," she said.

I felt something in my stomach and i gave a glare.

She giggled quietly not to attract attention.

"See, I told you so, you are doing it now," she said again when i was quietly looking at her.

I turned away from her.

Now I know why i have fallen for her.

But i have to say something.I took a deep breath.I don't care who I am going to be soon.I can't change my feelings.

"Chaerin, you know what?"

"mmm?"

"You are gentle, confident when you walk or talk, you have really beautiful eyes, long lashes which makes you look as the most prettiest girl for me,"

I didn't stop.

Her eys were widen.When i turned to look at her, she turn her face away facing the front.She was still listening at the same time blushing too.

'Remember the first time we met, well more to our eyes met.Second time on our pre-debut show,I looked into your eyes and now in school too,"

I took out the paper the was folded neatly and passed it to her table.

She look down and saw the paper but didn't look at me or touched the paper.

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I can't comment under your post. I tried but got rejected a couple of times.

Look out for errors in writing girl! Don't forget your "s". It's a good thing to add some suspense and excitement in your stories! When I was reading the chapter where she was followed by a stranger, I thought the stranger was Minho. And then in the next chapter he was in the room. =.= I guess the story is two guys after one girl like 'Boys over flowers' right? So, your heroine's room smells of rose? She uses air freshener because my room smells of smelly socks and sunshine. Kidding. It doesn't have any smell.

Chapter 23:

Rose fragrance.


her room looks neat and tidy.Everything is perfectly arranged.Her bed in the corner of the room,wardrobe next to it, table lamp on the other side.Her books are arranged neatly on the book rack.



"Hyung, here," He brought a cup of water.



I laid Chaerin on her bed.She looks stiff and uncomfortable.Maybe it's because of her school uniform that she is wearing.



Maybe i should take out her coat.It's so hot in here and it will make her sweat if she wear like this the while sleeping.I reached my hand to the button, but my mind stop working.I feel weird and i can feel my cheeks hot.Awkward.



"Ilhan, is there anyone else her?"



Ilhan shook his head.


"No. daddy is not here yet,"



i sighed.



I quickly unbutton her her coat without blinking.Done.I put the coat aside. Ilhan had already placed the water beside her on the table.If she wakes up, she should drink some water.

I stood up straightening myself.


"I should be going now,"


"Hyung, thanks again,"


I nodded and started walking out of her room.Before i leave i whispered to myself take care.


"Ilhan, take care of your sister," He agreed and smiled.


"I will,"


I open the house door and went out.Ilhan came out to greet farewell.


"Hyung,"


"mmm?"


"Do you like my sister?"


Uh?!!


'What," I can feel my heat radiating in every cheek cell!!


"I..I..." could it be....


NO.NO.


I must not fall......


This shouldn't be happening....


In any case...


Is it LOVE?!


Do I like her?


But how sure am I?


"I ..no, Ilhan.She is just my friend," I said it casually but i was feeling something weird.


I bowed to him and started walking.


Minho's POV


I was in my room when i heard the door bell ring.Someone in the living room answered it.It must be Jinki hung.Where is he from?


I came out of my room.Jinki hyung walk pass me to his room.


"Hyung, where were you just now?" I asked


"Sorry, i was late.It's nothing,"


He never hide anything.And I'm sure the is something.He didn't even answered my question.


I frowned at him and nodded.


"DINNER IS READY!!" Key shouted from the kitchen.






After dinner, I went back to my room.Taemin is busy doing his homework and Jonghyun is training.Onew and Key are in their room.I was going through a story book where i came across something that stopped me.


A poem.


An interesting one.It's a poem from a boy to a girl in this story.

I never was struck that hour

With love so sudden and so sweet,

Her face it bloomed like a sweet flower

And stole my heart away completely.

I read it again and image of an eyes came to my mind.Those beautiful almond eyes.Whose could it be? I closed my eyes and rested my back.

Those long lashes,sharp nose, round almond shaped eyes, tan skin. I couldn't figure out who it was but deep inside i know who it was.It just doesn't want to pop out....

The feeling of happiness sprouts. But i couldn't think.I wrote the verse in a paper and went back to sleep.

Chapter 22:Stranger following!

I sigh.

I left Min at the bus stop.I was walking home alone.It's already dark.Practicing was so much tiring and PE was so much worse!After lunch this afternoon, I had physical education for 2 hours!! My muscles are aching tremendously.Minho was so...athletic.OHMY, he wasn't running, he was flying!!



Suddenly, i felt cold.The wind was blowing against my face.I walked as fast as i can so i can reach home.

WAIT!

Why is there an extra shadow?! someone is following me?

I didn't stop.Instead i quicken my pace.The shadow was still following me....goosebumps were all over me..who would be following me at time like this..??

I was breathing heavily.I decided to turn and look..

OH NO!!

A total stranger!

And he have muscle! oo!

Conscience: RUN!

But my leg doesn't ant to run!! OK..RUN!!!!

I was running. I can feel my muscle aching.oh...no......running again?I just did it in my PE!

That is exercise.This is to SAVE YOUR LIFE.IDIOT!Run faster!

I reached a T junction.Where do i turn?

Left, right? left, right<

ok..LEFT.



BUMP! "Ahhhh," I fell down.

"Oh," a voice came from the person i hit.I stood quickly ready to run.I needed help but who knows if he is one of the guy who is chasing me .I'm doomed.

He caught my wrist.

YELP!

"Chaerin?"

O.0 That's my name.

Lee Jinki?!

I was still panting for breath.

"Onew-shi, the...there is..so-some-one...che..chasing me just now..." catching my breath.

Then the stranger was in front of us.

I held his shirt from the back.Scared what might happen.

Onew just walked away from the stranger still holding my wrist tightly.

I felt safe when he is holding my hand.

But the stranger was still following us...!!

"Onew-shi,he is still following us," i whispered so only he can hear.

"Just walk,"

I did as he said.

Now, I wasn't scared.I felt protected, cared.

I was panting anymore but my muscle are still aching and I'm sooooo TIRED!!

I turn around to look again and YES he is still following! OH, NO...why can't he go away..

I stop.

"Onew-shi, this is my place," I was in front of my apartment and i quickly let go of my hand that was held by Onew .

"Oh," he look at the place.

"Thank you so much.I will never forget your help in my life.I promise i will pay back one day," I was looking into his eyes.

Lee Jinki.The leader known as Onew of an upcoming kpop group/The gentle, warm, caring , lovely smile.

WHAT AM I THINKING?!

I smiled at him.

When i turn around to walk to my apartment lift, I saw the stranger is still there!!

I was scared, not because he might do anything to m, i'm scared he might to something to Onew.He is going to walk back home alone.Anything can happen.

I was worried.

"Onew-shi, come on...I'll show you my house,"I said.

He was staring at me all the time and came out to realize i ask him something.

"Uh?"

I shook my head and walked towards him.I held his wrist and started pulling him to the lift.

When we were in the lift, I let go of his hand

"Buya?" he asked still confuse

"tat guy was there, I was worried he might to something to you,"

"Chaerin, you don't have to worry,"

"I was worried," I pouted.

"So, you want me to stay in your house?"

UH?!

"No!" I answered abruptly.

He chuckled at my expression.

"Stay here until that guy disappear,"

He nodded.

I rang the doorbell of my house door.

"Noona!" Ilhan stopped when he saw Onew.

"Jin Ki hyung?" He was giving me why-is-he-here look.

"Anyeong," Onew greeted.

"Ilhan, there was a stranger following noona.He was started chasing me when i started running.Thank goodness Jin Ki-shi was there.Or not I would have bein kidnapped? I guess," i said it rather calmly.

He chuckled at me.

"Is dad already home?"

Onew's POV

"is dad already home?" she asked he brother.

Then she just fell down!!

"Chaerin!!!" I quickly move to hold her.

"Noona?!" Ilhan was worried.

"I think she fainted from tiredness.Let her rest," I carried her.

"Here," Ilhan showed her room.

When the door was open, a fresh smell came...rose....